I like

I really like, but I bet you lose a lot of people just in the first couple seconds, so I would say try and do something to make it a little more catchy

good

I like the song voice is pretty, my only complaint is if it was not in a digital it would probably sound a bit more like mumbling then singing

hmm

it seems like this is subtly epic... like it is trying to be some epic masterpiece but then spirals into depression or some such bullsheet anyways I like it could be better though